(to the reader
hear, in your mind,
the sound of water dripping
in a cave, echo echo echo.
this is the score inside this box.
feel, in your chest,
that tight clench of
foreboding, dread and shiver.
this is the atmosphere inside this cage.
place yourself in the mindset
of wanting to cry but you CAN NOT,
force the cold on you while you sweat.
try to move. to run and get away
but you CAN NOT your body is obstinate
and you feel stagnant.
feel the fever revel through your
unwilling but accessable body -
and submit to the POWER
because you CAN NOT do
otherwise. embrace this
disease but call it a
Blessing.
- DO IT.)
I want to explode, but my body won't allow me to.
Author notes
... ... i'm not allowed to.
Written January 25th, 2006
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What it's about is the last line: "i want to explode but my body won't allow me to" - or you can say i want to freak out but my mind won't let me - i am kept captive by multiple personalities or myself and they keep me in a box. and i can't come out. and i want other people to know what that's like, even if this is a weak portrayal of it. thank you for reading it three times.
reg -
the paradox and irony here cannot be missed
it is like a revelation about a frustration
makes me want to hug myself for some reason
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What the hell?
OK, I read it three times and still have no clue what is is about.
Saying that I find it strangely captivating.
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