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Destiny

When we first met, we said it’s  ‘Destiny’.
Destiny again made us meet after all these years.
Years of trying to live our lives, with whom we thought were 'the one !'.
                           
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Each time his letter reached my heart,
I felt a heart beat missing
as his mail always arrived,
when I mostly need it.
As I went through the letters,
I felt it was indeed, an act of Destiny.

Years went by and we made love for the first time.
I felt that, Destiny was right.
Started to trust him and allow him to rule my life,
since, as so far, It felt like paradise.

Went to England,( my first time),
We’ve travelled, we laughed and cried!
But that night in London, It just felt so right!
As we were making love, he looked in my eyes,
and started to whisper the wedding vows.
In a water fall of tears I felt in peace,
realising that it was definitely, our Destiny.

Nights on the phone, crying this distance,
But he came across to give me his commitment.

After that, the ship came to my country.
It was a week of love that we shared so emotionally.
Above all, unique was that Thursday night.
Felt our souls making love, in the name of Destiny.

December came by, and we met again,
Sweet romance strolling through the taste of
Port and sex,
As our intensity was loved by love,
Changing our unreachable dreams to a sweet reality: ‘Destiny’

New year had come, and I have touched the ground,
With his love and patience, I struggled up.
Reaching, tasting, felling again, US!
Few days to go and I’ll be in his arms,
Yet I fear! Cause it might be the last time. ‘Destiny ? ’

                                                       To be cont...

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Written January 25th, 2006

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  • Sandygram silver member
    February 10, 2006
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    WONDERFUL POEM

    Oh what a beautiful poem. Such a beautiful and heartfelt story. So amazing. Thank you for sharing and the smiles. Take care, Sandy

  • Bella-Malta
    January 26, 2006
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    Oh my Sweet friend! Thanks for this comment. I know that you know me so well now, Yesterday When I wrote this I was really fearing what our destiny have for us. Then my love called me and he surprised me with his words. I think this poem will have a continunity Shaz.Lets see how it will goes... hoping there will ever be an end as I believe that soul mates live together in this life and in the next. I am aiming high, i know ! but believe me he deserve nothing less.
    Will deffinately be seeing you on Tuesday ! Oh thanks for coming down to see me. thanks thanks thanks! Love Bella- Malta

  • Apache143
    January 25, 2006
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    Destiny is what you make it, for only you have the option of making things happen and all good things happen for a reason and I think and feel you have found your reason.... A wonderful tribute to you and Paul in this write and I truly wish the pair of you the very best of luck in your future together.... Please my darling Bella dont be frightened for I feel not only have you achieved your destiny but found your soulmate for the rest of your lives....

    See you on Tuesday, your ever caring, loving and impossibly insane friend SHAZ