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Why Cant I have her

I stand right next to her,
She walks right through me,
I catch her when she falls,
she does not thank me,
I hold her when shes cold,
she doesnt return the favor,
Ive been here all of her life,
I am her savior,
I wont give up,
I wont leave her,
I love her, I cant let go,
I fight her fears and scare away her foes,
Im right next to her, always waiting,
Always contemplaiting,
why she does not realize I am here...

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Written January 24th, 2006

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  • leander Moderators member
    January 30, 2006
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    You have submitted a thought-provoking piece here, that captured a lot of sadness in fact Unfortunately it happens a whole lot that someone would do anything for somebody else (like you), yet the favors are never returned... I hope things will get better for you soon!


  • Allieistehgorgeous
    January 24, 2006
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    Wow, I really admire your work. I love this poem. And many people such as myself can relate to it, I am sure. Thanks for the awesome poem.