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Stop Falling

My tears just keep falling
Like the leaves off trees in the fall
No way to hold them back
No way to keep them in
I try to drown out the thoughts by music

Was that the word love they mentioned?

I have to turn it off its to deep
I cant take it
My head starts to spin again
Here come the tears

There has to be a way to make these tears stop
I have tried everything
Nothing seems to work for me
The more i think about it the more tears come

I just want him to be happy
The only way to do that is to set him up with my best friend

Star light star bright lay me down to sleep tonight
Star bright star light don't let me wake to the morning light

Its the only way
I have to leave this painful reality

Now i lay me down to sleep i pray the lord my soul to keep and WHEN i die before i wake i pray the lord my soul to take.......



GOODNIGHT

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FUCK IT!!!! i hate this shit!!!!!!!
Written January 24th, 2006

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  • bluidbabiegirl
    February 9, 2006
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    beautiful && deep, but very sad. If he doesn't feel what you do then hes not worth it.

  • dephormed-schoolman
    January 26, 2006
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    sad

    im sorry about what happened. i dont know what to say but not a lot of guys would so i would it works out for you. im sure it'll get better.>Bob

  • falling through
    January 26, 2006
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    awww baby i feel for you. i know how you feel (cough shelby kevin cough) its really good and know that i will always be there for you. always here to talk...dont forget. ive got your back so just wipe the tears away and keep going. theres nothing else you can really do. stay strong babe
    ♥laceyloo
    Edited on Jan 26, 10:36 because ''.


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    January 24, 2006
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    i remember when i was in a similar situation, now a days i find my self saying almost the same lines "I just want him to be happy" unfortunately, that is no longer with me. I once read that the hardest thing is to lose someone you love, as in they have passed away, but I disagree at least you know they are somewhere good, it is harder to lose someone that you love that is still alive and watch them be happy without you, and do all the things that they promised you would do together, with someone else. Well any how great write, good that you have an outlet for you hurt and frustration.
    Tasha
    Edited on Jan 24, 4:51 p.m. because 'correction'.