Don’t hide from the light
Walk out and be in sight
Show yourself to everyone
Feel the heat from the sun
Don’t hide from your friends
Relationships never end
Talk and share your feelings with them
Don’t you see they think you’re a gem?
Don’t hide from your mother
She’s there when you’re bothered
She is there in every way
Ask her something everyday
Don’t hide from your dad
He promises to never get mad
Always there as your shield
Dad’s a useful token you can wield
Don’t hide from anything
Open your eyes and flap your wings
The world is open for you to soar
Let them know that you can roar!
Author notes
This is a little hope that i think people could use when you're upset about something. i just felt like it.... please comment!
Written January 24th, 2006
A contest entry
- almost whatever you want to write about by Deadly Shame.
350 points, ended January 29, 2006, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nice poem, though it's much easier to say not to hide than to do it. Great poem and good luck.
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Very very very good
Nice...Short and to the point..I think?I dont know if there was a point but thats me...LoL Nice write..and to what the guy said above me..Go somewhere don't get stuck like most of us do...especially like i did >_> -
Hun, if you had a singing voice, you could be soo much. I had to come read this poem, too.
Again, it is agreed that some things obviously can't be agreed upon, but that's okay. It flows extremely well and the background helps give you that feeling of the poem.
Your mind seems almost beautiful.
You have a writing talent.
You are young.
Your an extremely pretty girl.
Go somewhere. Don't ever let any dreams die. -
I don't really agree with most of it. I mean, it's not really always true, but it was okay I guess. It had a good flow.
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wow amaizing full of hope you could go far with a good poem like this
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