You are the ugliest person I know
It is not necessarily your face
It is your heart
Cold as ice
Hard as rock
And black as coal
I've never known someone who thrives off of hurting others as much as you do
What will you tell your daughter
As she calls another woman "mother"
How will you explain why you don't love her anymore?
Will you blame it on others
As you have your whole life?
How will she explain to her future husband
Why she is so broken?
You have ruined yet another life
And she isn't even old enough to defend herself
You don't care
So I don't know why I'm yelling at you
You can't see
You can't hear
You can't feel
You're just an empty shell
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Written January 24th, 2006
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She probably feels tootally empty inside.There has to be a reason for her doing the things she does, but what.Perhaps there is something cryinfgout for help.When someone causes pain it can be very hard to realise that perhaps they are suffering themselves.A heart wrenching write, well put, Ros
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This is really nice...but some of the ideas came across kinda confusing...I can't really pinpoint them...it's just...well...some of your ideas contradict eachother...like...
Well you said that this person (whoever it is) is ugly on the inside...but then you said that this person is "just an empty shell". How can they be ugly on the inside if there's nothing on the inside...because that's what an empty shell is, right, empty...
Yeah I guess that's what confused me the most about this.
On the other hand, it's rather well written, nice strong emotions. At the end it reminds me of something I wrote called "Hate You".
Take care and keep smiling.
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