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Do I love you
Is that what you want to know?
What do you think?
Have I not shown it to you
Have I said anything that meant
the opposite of what you think
my answer to you is
Yes! I do like never before
I love you and only you
You are great, the aroma of your skin
The smell of your hair
Its not that I doubt it
Its just that I’m afraid,
Afraid to lose you
Afraid to lose the one thing I love
No one can compare
You’re not a game
You’re the only thing that is real
Everything else is as fake as it could be
I would like you to change
I don’t know in what way
All that really matters
Is that you love me back
For you I would walk over fire
For you ill do anything
Just to be with you all of my life

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i didnt know how to write this thing...so i just did it..
Written January 24th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • Bri Class of 2009
    January 5, 2007
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    oscar this is really good and im glad leila is home brittany


  • twiztidXxXbeauty
    February 17, 2006
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    its great oscar,i miss talkin to u and sara

  • KermitsWoman
    January 24, 2006
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    *Tear*
    Thank you for entering in my contest! It's a wonderful poem and i can't thank you enough for blessing me with it!!!

    Love always with kisses and hugs

    ~~Sara~~