Where have you gone to?
Where is it you stay?
I need you here so badly
and I mean right away!
I can’t write these words
dangling 'round in my mind,
without your guiding light
my fingers are blind!
Can’t you see I'm faltering
now that you've slipped away?
So please come back to me...
I need a fresh start today!
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Sending out an all point bulletin..have you seen her???
Written January 24th, 2006
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Oh, I wish my muse were born with bells on her toes! It is much too often now that I am at a loss for what to write. Usually when I am doing too many things at a time, or have too much on my mind my muse must get freaked out and she hides.
For this reason, I have a folder on my computer packed full of "unfinished works" ones I began and for some reason or other was interrupted and couldn't finish. The downfall on my part must be that I do not write in intervals and I don't leave pieces unfinished, becuase once my inspiration is gone.. it stays gone
A great write that many a writer should understand very well.
s and best wishes... ~genielassie~
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I do not think your muse is very far off. Probably hiding right behind you.
Your write was fun to read and had great rhyme, rhythm and flow.
Good luck in the contest.
Jim -
Great
Short but great. When I want my muse to come back I always write on it going missing, works for me. This one is well penned. Good luck -
I truly think you have found your muse......LOL
You have captured the rhyme very well and the flow is steady to the end!! Great little pen.....
Smiles
your way >>>>Sandy 
San-d
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LOL Lost your muse have you? I think not! This was so cute. Perfect flow and a wonderful entry for this contest. Best of luck. ~Pam
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Sandi...I'd say your muse isn't too far away Probably hanging out, having a drink with mine someplace Best wishes in the contest
Ruth -
Legend you are too funny
If it wasn't for your cute Sherlock, I still wouldn't have written anything hehehehe
Thank you for your great thoughts and inspiration! Blessings Sandi
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Only thing wrong with you lov is you got hit with the love bug
good job--kirby -
Great job with the rhyming and wording. Good luck with the contest.
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See that. . .. even when you think you have nothing to write about, there is always seomthing there. Now we need to have a contest with poems about "nothing" a la Seinfeld.
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Hi Sandi Just who do you think you are kidding, I know you too well to know that your muse is kept chained up in you cellar. I love this one, short sweet and to the point, a wonderful write .Never expected anything else Good luck in the contest
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Well Sandi, I am sure that you will find soon "her" and Sophia do not need to help you
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light and entertaining.
Sandy, this is a light, musical poem and I enjoy it very much. It has the rhyme we were asked for, and you have done that well and you have done well with the meter. I get the feeling that you have written many times beforem because this is good. The form matches the message, and the humour hides there under a blanket of yearning. How magic is that? For whom are you searching? Is it your poetry muse? I think it is there with you even if you can't see it, because you write so fluently. Now I am going to read you home page and some more poetry by you. -
Good morning Sam, ginger huh?? Why not, I've tried everything else! Thank you for your sweet thoughts and encouragement on this wee scribble, I truly appreciate you my friend and many blessings Sandi
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Sandi, welcome back after your hiatus!!! I hope you're feeling better and by the sounds of this cute little ditty, you are! So very cute this is, my friend! Thank you for sharing and I wish you the biggest of hugs and loads of good health!! Love ya, Sandy
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wtchrpr...4.0
Dear Sandi;
So sorry to hear you've been under the weather. I'm happy to see that you have posted a lovely, whimsical poem to herald your recouperation. I bet if you set out a nice hot toddy of ginger brandy... your muse would be there in a flash. -
sending you Sophia...hey she's got a pretty good nose for sniffin!
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oooohh, sorry Lynda, don't ya hate when that happens??
Thank you so much for your great thoughts and encouragement! and blessings Sandi
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I'm off to search for her. I shall leave no stone unturned... puts on her sherlock holmes attire.
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Oh Meli, if you find her, I'll write you a novel in poetry! I finished with the fiscal closes and wound up getting that virus back I had at Christmas and can't seem to shake it and ole musy jumped ship to get away!
Thank you so much for your support of my scribbles my sweet friend, I appreciate you so much
Love ya! Sandi
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If I find her, will you promise to post more of your beautiful poetry? I miss it tremendously.
Cute little poem, Sandi. I think mine is out partying with yours. Perhaps we need a major search party.
Good luck in the contest. Maybe a trophy will bring her back to you.
Bestest of wishes
~Meli~ -
adorable
awwwwwwww...Such an adorable write, Sandi!...And your authors comment made me think of that song "Have you seen her" NOw it is stuck in my head lol....Wonderful poem!...Lynda
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