One...
Slowly the smoke slides away, the smell of perfume exciting me. in the mist is the perfect form of a man. hair of chocolet brown that plays with his brow and strong jaw, tanned skin that like the moon glows, tall with rippling muscle, hazle eyes shining bright with the knoledge of only love and life. The perfect man from my minds eye, swims to life to take me away with an eagles cry...
Two...
On a bed of the lightest of clouds, is where he shows me the meaning of life. Wonderful joyest the greatest pleasure given to me. Slowly, gently moving to the beat of our hearts, loving each other, learning the other as we move faster, faster. Oh, sweet agony, lustful guilt you know me well as he pushes life into my body loveingly, pouring all that is in the world into every part of my soul. This love could never falter, this disire will never grow old...
Three...
Sweetly you kiss my wet body loving me with each one. Holding me close to your heart, keeping me from all bad things in this world. The music of your body softly sing me pnto complete bliss floating like a drug, i dream of lust and love blured to one.
Author notes
Written January 23rd, 2006
A contest entry
- Three Wishes (erotica contest) by JM Kenyon.
400 points, ended January 28, 2006, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this is really good, I like it a lot. It's so sweet!!!!! It's so romantic too, and I am such a romantic, which is one reason I love it so much! Keep up the good work!
Nicole -
OoOoO this is nice. This was one of those poems that makes you glad you have senses! This was completey erotic and edgey, but I liked it! The form was great, I liked the way you structured this, it was interesting and refreshing. Great read!
Belle
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Awweee....very romantic!!
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this is really good... i like it alot but i cant exactaly put my finger on why. it is very discriptive and i guess thats always good and the words you used were nice so yeah... good job
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HEY THIS IS REALLY GOOD WORK ITS AWESOME.
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10 out of 10
I am diggin' this it's not graphic at all it's well written.Wonderful job -
Thanks Rusty. I haven't exactly had sex yet but i do know what it's like to love someone so i just kinda but love into action i suppose is a way you could say it. great hearing from you, ttyl
~Lynn
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Wow. I'd never expected to read such an emotional piece about physical love from a woman your age. That's not a slam either. Very well written and depicted yet not tastelessly graphic. Good job girl. Rusty.
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Very well written, smooth and sweet and wistful. You've used all three wishes in a very beautiful, charming, wonderful manner.
s and best wishes... ~genie~
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This is really good, tabbi! Not really erotic but it still has the sensual flavor of lust and love, this man with chocolate brown hair you speak of whom may he be? Is he tall and built like a skater run down by an injury, heart swept to the voice of a radiantly sexy being. Well you have called me in awhile, so if your ever not busy call me! Cause I dont wnat to get you in trouble by calling you!
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