buttercups sway
within shuffled green fields,
- yellow pegs of Spring.
Author notes
Written January 23rd, 2006
A contest entry
- Haiku contest: 4-6-5 by macandrew.
300 points, ended January 24, 2006, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Mel, you don't need the punctuation, but this is otherwise a lovely piece. Very well crafted indeed. "yellow pegs of spring" - wonderfully inventive phrase.
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A well earned trophy. A wonderful read.
thanks for playing along.
John -
hey grannyeri
thanks for stopping by to read and comment, greatly appreciated
hugs,
melx -
hi abstract dreamer When i first saw what the contest entailed I was intrigued, read one small snippet about cribbage online, saw the words 'cards' and...hey presto the poem was at my fingertips in seconds. I really thought it was going to be hard to write. Thanks for the congrats it's much appreciated
hugs,
Melx -
Hi Sweet Sue I can't wait for the Spring either, I hate getting up in the dark and coming home in the dark. Thank you for the comment hun,
hugs,
Melx -
Hi Ogreatbalone thanks for taking the time to comment on my haiku. I was surprised to win a cup lol
hugs,
Melx -
Enjoyed your bronze winning haiku. Nicely done. Liked the flowers that went with the piece too.
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This is great! Nature, cribbage, and season all right here with just ten little words. Excellent! CONGRATULATIONS ON WINNING THE BRONZE. WELL DESERVED!
Renee
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Congratulations on your win. This is very beautiful...makes me anxious for spring. Great imagery. Well done. ~ Sue
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nice job on this , congrats on the bronze...peace
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