A heart jaded that bleeds pain
Tears burn through your porcelain face
Gasping for air
Drowning in a sea of fear
Those voices in your head
Screaming to the core of your soul
Cursing at your very being
Those baby blue eyes, pouring hatred
Spitting words of disgust to the heavens
Your tainted soul
Rips through the arms of angels
Damnation being your destiny
My fate was to be
A butterfly in your arms
You inflicted pain and diminished my love
Sorrow you weep, facing Karma with her double edge sword
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Written January 23rd, 2006
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Wonderful poem here, I have missed reading your works of art you portray so much emotion it is amazing. Look forward to reading much more.
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I like this poem - I like how you can show the somber side of love, how it can cause suffering and pain despite its sweet nature. Great write!
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Nothing like pain to make agony out of love. A heart can only take so much before it has to respond in kind. I do hope your heart can manage the personal trauma it may be going through at the moment. May it get back on track with the blessing it so deserves!
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i thought it was awesome honey... was just a bit frightened i had done something wrong to hurt you lol. Paranoid karen to the surface!!!! Love ye
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My baby girl Nour you remind me so much of Krystal. Both very protective. This is just a write, so no worries. And you are the amazing poet of the family.
I LOVE YOU my baby girl
your momi always,
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OMG, Karen you will always have those amazing blue eyes.. This was just a write, I hope it wasn't that bad.
Hope to talk to you real soon, miss you girlie.
Love always,
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Glad that you have not forgotten about me while I was gone.. I have some catching up to do. Yes and that Karma sword could be dangerous.
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Oh Tia it was great talking to you the other night! I do miss you miss very much.
Love always,
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And always here with my arms stretched out to you!
O O Lay always.
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Thank you for you nice comment.
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To whomever this poem is dedicated to, I'm gonna go plant a thread in his heart
Momy this is a beautiful write, I haven't read anything by you in a while but the talent is still there..
Much love from my side of the world..
Your baby girl
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wow i hope i am not your baby blue eyes anymore lol.
This is an incredibly powerful piece of writing. Good to see you at it again and what a comeback! Incredible! -
You're right, karma is a double edged sword and people just dont realize it's coming back to get them in the end. Glad you're back, this was so beautiful and full of imagery
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Dear Rosa, a very heartfelf poem, I hope everything is OK with you, it was lovely talking to you the other night, I wished it could be longer. Take care of yourself my darling.
Love Tia
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This is a beautiful piece of work considering you havent written anything in forever. I love that you write with such heart. I hope that no one is breaking your heart thought, I'll have to personally take care of them
Each word pulls me towards the next, very well written my love.
Always here for you with arms outstreched,
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good poem. i like this one. u have a talent for imagry i think. keep up the good work.
-Mi amor
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