Lemons are sour
But i can eat them every hour..
Lemonade is so delicious
Bless our souls, its almost heinous.
In my luscious fantasy
lemons fulfil my ecstacy.
Jugs of lemonade, full of ice
slushing down my throat, all tingly and nice.
I can gulp it down really fast,
how I wish it would always last.
Author notes
Lol, this is a poem is the result of a game my sister and I were playing. To play the game one player has to write down a line, fold up the paper there and tell the other player the last word of that line. The other player then comes with a sentence the last word of which rhymes with the one in the previous sentence and then folds up the paper covering up the line......and so on and so forth. The outcome of the game is usually hilarious, and it's so cool when you read it at the end it all makes sense! 
It was my idea to write on lemon.....well 'coz I just can't live without the darn things! So that's the poem....no alteration.
Written January 23rd, 2006
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Now that prior comment was not meant to be sent without the rest but I guess I hit something to make it go...so...I love the idea of this game and thanks for the idea and rest assured I will have my mates giving it a go real soon. Will try to get to some more of your writing soon as...well wishes
Linda
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Yessss!!!
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Sweet and funny
Haha it was surely so funny. Which line was yours and which one Batool’s? The first is yours as I guess.
That must be a funny game. We have something named “Mosha’ere” in which there are several players. The first one read a couplet (no need to be his) and with the last letter of it, the second player read a couplet. I don’t like lemons much but I eat oranges too much.
Thanks for sharing and I want to see the result of next poem of yours with Batool
~Massy~
P.S. I wonder why you stop with poetry. Your works are really good. Why hun?
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3 Stars ***
Hi Zain
, we have been playing such games since as long as i can remember in our family, not just me and my sister, but even my parents play it... not exactly inthe same way, we just say any statement and then someone thinks about something that rhymes and we speak any dumb/damn thing.. its really hilarious, i agree..
anyways.. this is too good a poem to be first poem by anyone...
My poem was horrible, i mean my first poem... buti always cherish my first poem..
.. was only about 5 when i made it 
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nice write here.. good work.. thanks for sharing my dear friend...
I hope you write more.. and more .. and more
take cares and have a nice time my dear friend... just keep it up.. your humble little friend...
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... ... - vic ( who else? )
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marvellous
a cool poem.it made me feel thirsty too.go on.best of luck -
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hey..that was a nice game and a cute poem too..lemons..very unusual and good theme..
may u write such lovely poems with interesting themes in future..
Ur pal,
Parth.
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first of all thnx ! i was in a darned mood n read the poem on mina nagi's recommendations but as soon as i opened the page ur sunny border made me smile, thnx for giving this smile... its a very cute poem n u reminded me of the games we used to play whn we were kids
keep adding the innocence of childhood in our lives... -
show must go on
wah wah wah kya likha hai, i liked ur poem & notoriopus game, hoping to read sopme more from yuo -
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Oh Zainu apa! Awesome poem/game man! Missing u n Bats alllootttt!!!!!!! -
WOW... Your First poem and I'm the first one to comment ... This is an excellent poem and it rhymes beautifully without any glitches... I love limes too... what a lovely game to pass time...Can't wait to read what transpires from the next game ...Good luck and all the best with more poems...
mina
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