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Open my eyes to Freedom

Every time I get this feeling
Every time it’s always the same
Every memory flashes by
It triggers in my eyes

My eyes are my weakness
They are never closed
Always open to show the world
Exactly how I’m feeling

Snow falling to the ground
Beauty floating in the air
I want to be absolutely free
I want to fly around

My wings are still quite hidden
Deep inside my memory
They only came out once before
Then went back to hiding

I must admit that I was scared
Fearing that I’d lose you
But after all that we’ve been through
You would think I would know better

Strength and love was what we had
Open hearts and open minds
You were always there for me
But I was never there for you

Now it’s my fault that you’re gone
My whole world is spinning faster
I just want you to know
That my heart will always be open for you

You were the one who opened my eyes
You were the one who spread my wings
You were the one who showed me beauty
You were the one who gave my freedom
You were the one who broke the lock to my heart
And you are the one who I’ll always love

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Written January 23rd, 2006

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  • LovelyTayBaby
    June 28, 2007

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    Hey I really like this :] This is veryyyy romantic and sweet... well... I think it's romantic lol.... Great job. It seems that you really care about someone, and hopefully they care just as much for you. =]

  • Silently Broken
    April 27, 2006
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    An interesting poem. I like it alot. I like it because it speekes of a very commun feeling, love and how we all fear to lose it. You were able to show your grtetude for the one you love very well.