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Live And Let Live

Don’t cry when you wake up
And I’m gone.
Forget me now, so it won’t be a
Problem then.
I’m not worth the time you spend
I’ll only hurt you in the end
Pretend you never knew me
You’ll be fine.
I’m just a lie that will tear you apart
I’m just a pain eating holes in your heart
I’m someone you shouldn’t have known from the start
A surreal hologram of this life
I lie to live, and live to lie.
I take souls and kill them inside
And you’re too young to die.

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Written January 23rd, 2006

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  • There It Goes
    January 28, 2006
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    just so you know i wrote that in november.


    bye

  • XaloneXinXtheXdarkX
    January 24, 2006
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    good luck on the contest also!!!!!!!

  • XaloneXinXtheXdarkX
    January 24, 2006
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    fantastic! it's hard to give someone up but it takes a big prson to to wats write. this is so nicly written and it has an absolutly awsome flow. keep up the great work!!!
    XxXalyssaRaeXxX


  • Jenn-Swenson
    January 24, 2006
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    hey aubrey great write i like it good luck in the contest hope everything is going good well ttyl


  • xBleedingxWerewolfx
    January 23, 2006
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    good

    this is good aubrey (but i'm sorry i cant do that, i'm glad to have met you, you showed me happyness and i will always love you for that) you did great keep it up and don't worry about me i'm fine. I know things will get better for the both of us so i'm not worried .... oddly for some reason i said yes to dating someone...... hmmm kinda odd since i said i didn't want to date anyone for a wile but oh well i can't just dump him after a day and i don't want to dump him anyways but yeah i hope you find someone new and i hope you have a happy time with her (my sugjestion don't date over the internet, unless you want to go crazy when you can't see them) love you always ~Mary~


  • Aligirl1155
    January 23, 2006
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    Excellent

    very good, i love the part where you say Don’t cry when you wake up And I’m gone. Forget me now, so it won’t be a Problem then. Sadness is sealed with this, where you might want to forget someone , or maybe you want them to forget you. becuase it was nothing but pain.

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