It was so long ago
That I said I love you
At first you asked me...
Do you really love me?
Of course my answer was yes
Then the unexpected happened
Your father came into the picture
Telling me we were too young
Soon I forgot my feelings
And then we stopped talking
Five years after we first met
You found me again by chance
Old memories, old feelings came back
Seeing how you’ve become a beautiful woman
Now new, stronger feelings have come over me
What if I said "I love you" again?
Would it be too soon for that?
I missed my chance once already
And have spent years regretting it.
I’m not going to loose you again
... no matter what ...
Author notes
A personal love poem. It pretty much explains itself and the story behind it. 
Written January 23rd, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- How do you really feel by KermitsWoman.
364 points, ended January 24, 2006, 3 entries
Silver trophy winner
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The first 2 stanzas perfectly describe the situation Im in right now. I hope that things work out a little sooner than in the last stanzas though. lol. It was great though and perfectly written ~~Britt~~
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Thanks for your comment. I'm glad you liked it
--Tim -
oh my god thats so cute i love it makes me think of my fiance
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awwe sooo cute! well I hope everything turns out the way you would like....
~Niki -
'the gurl' saw it.... *twitch* yes i saw it.. in fact i saw it like a month ago...
glad u liked... my tim! *clutches* -
no way she did? marz...... *looks around* *glares*
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GOOO TIM!!!!!!!!! LOVED IT!!! The girls seen it?? LOL COOLIO!!!!!XOX!!
Talk to me anytime always here for ya!
~Candi~
Edited on Jan 23, 11:08 p.m. because ''. -
She's already seen this. And commented. lol
--Tim -
NO don't ever give up on your feelings for someone!
I know that this girl is special to you and I think you need to make sure she sees this
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Wowow yeah Jim! Go for her! Get her! DO things that you will not regret of them! Dont let anyone stop you! Beautiful poem !! Wonderful penned! Glad to see you're here again!
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Wonderful poem I really loved the last 4 lines of your poem I was never in a place like that but I have lots of regrets about my past,anyways I really enjoyed reading your poem
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AWWWWWWWWWW.....That was so cute.You Go Boy.Don't you ever give up on love if it's meant to be.I admire you a lot for fighting back.Great Poem. Emily
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Marz, I talked to your sister like a month ago or whenever that was... on new years? I can't remember... anyways, and she was like: So you're Tim! And then she retold me the "Story of Tim" So ya... lol
--Tim -
oh wow! Tim,
Wonderful job. i dont know what to say i know its hard dealing with parents that come and try to run your life thinking they know how you feel but the truth is they dont, they cant feel the things you feel in your heart. and they cant feel the pain that you feel. but yet they think they can... and they will never understand.
you did a great job, keep writing take care peace to ya
&hearts:
~Beth -
ive only told my mum mush, my sis dont kno.. nor does fran or any1 exept u and tim so t'en quite pa!
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o come on ppl stop saying its a 'cute story'...
its not cute... providencial... but not cute... i despize that word u no thats wat marz mum said when she heard... coz apparently marz has been telling like a ton of pps... and ya... 'cute' seems to rule day... lol
wasn't expecting u to post this... ya... long story... and im not gonna loose u for the world...
great poem tim... ya. old feelings... hmm... lets hope its not all in the past... tho it dont appear to b so... hmm...
mushy -
Awwwwwww I know this story its so cute!!! And it makes you think; what were the chances of you finding each other again? You did a great job on this, put plenty of emotion into it and its good you've come to a decision Great job keep it up!!
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