Starts as a whisper
But turns to a scream
Begins with a smile
Ends with a frown
From riding that high
To the bottom falling out
Seeing myself sink further
Each day spiraling down
Aimless and chaotic
This mind of mine
Treachery of my own heart
Betrayal of soul
Losing my place
Misplacing myself
Something I can never escape
Surrounds like a plague
Scaring off those around me
Watching them flee
Seeing myself sink further
Drowning in the abyss
Author notes
Who fucking cares anymore...
Written January 23rd, 2006
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Hi there, I havent been on in a long time. I formerly was known as LoveInBetween. Sorry to see your feeling down, This was sad and achingly familiar to me. Beautifly written. I only hope you find a smile and a little hope today.
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wow
WOW this was really great. So many times ive felt like this but luckily someone reaches out and grabs my hand. Great job, and beautiful pic. XXOO Jane
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this is beautiful i like it alot i like how u use different things to compare ur feelings to....u did a great job!! keep up the great work!!!
XoXoXo
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Thanks for the comment..I'm sure i'll be alright...just not real happy right now..and actually haven't been for a long time...it just gets to me from time to time...but I always keep on going...and it probably will turn into a song in the near future...since I recently picked up my guitar again and have started playing...
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I CARE~~!! ;
s you tightly; whats wrong? i haven't heard form you in so long.... you don't seem to happy, i'll have to fix that 
SMILE~! ;laughs; its the power of suggestion seriously tho, i'm worried about you, this is a great poem, it would prolly make a wonderful song too.
jan -
thank you...
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Deep...Truely Deep..you are an excellent writer. i love you choice of words
xoxo<3 Jessi
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