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Whatever happened

Thought this could be true
Thought this could be real
Thought our love would happen once again.

Now I'm hanging on your last goodbye
Feeling these wounds open again.
Looking at our last picture together
Wondering if this will be worth it in the end

NOT FINISED

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Its choppy and not finsihed...
Written January 23rd, 2006

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  • Vernette
    February 10, 2006
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    i have too... i have things inside that would kill those around me.. i have already planned my own destruction in a way. yeah we should. we have a 5 day weekend coming up... perfect time!!
    lovens
    bobo


  • BloodRedTears
    February 8, 2006
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    Then why do you keep things in so much? Or so it seems to me! I dunno....I hope we can all hang out soon. It kind of made me sad when we couldn't last weekend. But its over and done with! Lots of Lovin
    ~Rachel~

  • Vernette
    February 7, 2006
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    yeah, its not good to hold things in like that... trust me i know... i loved you!! i do hope things will get better very soon for us all!! oh, they haven't done it yet.. i am trying to spread the word so they don't
    lovens
    bobo


  • BloodRedTears
    February 3, 2006
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    I'm slowly working on it....I wish all this would go away. I'm so tired of crying myself to sleep, because I keep getting my hopes up, even though I promise myself I wouldn't!!! And how I tell everyone I don't! And I don't know why I'm opening up so much....its just something I'm tired of keeping in! Oh and go Brandon....once you pop you just can't stop huh? They will be fucking like bunnies here soon! Lol....ok I don't wanna think about that anymore...my mind has had its limits on gross things for the day!
    love ya
    ~Rachel~

  • Vernette
    February 3, 2006
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    FINISH THIS SOON RACH!!! you need to cuz it is very good and i like it alot and it is very sad. i hope that one day you won't feel this way anymore and you can live again... as normal as we can get right? tee hee. being normal is overrated. but yeah.. write again soon chickie!! well, g2g im at school and yeah... brandon is sitting next to me and i haven't seen or talked to him all week and he is ignoring me and ahhh... guess what? he's planning to do it with his little sophomore gf on prez day. gross huh? so much for being the poster boy of virginity... i hate hypocrites!! well i loved you and i will talk to you soon, k?
    lovens
    bobo

  • The Cadmanator
    January 23, 2006
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    You've got a good opening, now you needa good ending =D.. sorry for reading, i couldn't resist XD

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