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Being and Time

Apophantic of what is true in phenomena
Appearing and announcing that they are from neumena
Being the universal concept which is not a genus,indefinable but self-evident
Covering up of its counter concept of hiddeness, burying and disguisement
With each hiddenness it turns up accidental of the best intentions.
Dasein to work out the question of manifesting itself and discourse,
Exhibiting existence,existentiell,existential and existentiality as remorse
Factically grasping entities in the most authentic sense of hermeneutics
Its historicality interrogating the histrocity of such investigating
Mere appearance of logos concerned on ontic ontological is the answer to such questioning
Ontology ownmost phenomena does it shown
Where presence of Philosophy is proximately disown
A science of subjective synthesis of temporality
Of temporal determinateness of the traditionality
Where consciousness become transparent authentic facts of historicity
And perceiving of truth veiled with deep rooted anxiety about factuality.

Author notes

Read this philosophically with the awareness of your being and time or the two thing itself.
Written January 22nd, 2006

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  • onealone
    March 3, 2006
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    Wow, I don't deserve that ...Thank You!


  • thewriterwithin
    March 3, 2006
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    Excellent word choice, excellent meaning, very well written!
    I totally loved this. Your vocabulary is amazing, and it really makes one think.

    Take Care,
    x PatientGrace x
    Jasmine


  • onealone
    February 20, 2006
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    Thank you so much!

    Ever grateful,

    Alfred

    and may you be guided by


  • MountainGirl
    February 19, 2006
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    i'm too tired to extract any meaning out of this, but i really like what i read. your word choice is great, and i really liked the way you separated the word "questioning" from everything else. Again, i need to read it a bit slower to get the full meaning out of it, but wow! great write!


  • onealone
    February 9, 2006
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    Thank you so much!I'm so grateful that you take a look.Thanks again.


  • Shakes-spear
    February 9, 2006
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    Lots of big words, but can you dance? This was a great read and I was glad I stopped in. thanks for your comment on my work too! shaker


  • onealone
    January 28, 2006
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    Ok,Thanks for the appreciation...My pleasure is yours for the bookmark.


  • AshtrayBaby
    January 28, 2006
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    Intriguing

    Wow. I've only ever read one other poem like this. To me these are the best kids. You get the message across with your enormous vocabulary. Very meaningful and definently philosophical. You wouldn't mind if I bookmarked this, would you? Doesn't matter. I'll do it anyways. <3

  • onealone
    January 28, 2006
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    Thanks for the comment and applause.I'll help you find out the words...It's the term of Husserl phenomenology.Dare it Please!Good luck.


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    January 28, 2006
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    you just did a great job of challenging my vocabulary--this is good--tomorrow i am going to get out the dictionary so i can read this and understand the 'big words'. i am not being cynical here either. thank you for doing this.


  • onealone
    January 25, 2006
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    Thank you so much.I'll consider your suggestion...I'll do it soon.


  • Entwining Beauty
    January 25, 2006
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    this is a great poem,though i think it would look much better if you broke it into stanzas,
    other than that your poem is amaxzing.sorry to be critical,it is abeutiful well written poem great job.
    Edited on Jan 25, 7:05 p.m. because 'blinking keys keep getting stuck.'.

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