Looking for that one true tune,
the one that makes your eyes light up.
Looking for that one little note,
the one that makes your heart skip a beat.
Reaching for that one warm rhythm,
the one that makes me love you.
Reaching for that one easy feeling,
the one that makes me want you.
Touching that one graceful breath,
the one that makes you want me.
Touching that one peaceful stay,
the one that makes you love me.
Holding that one loving piece,
the one that makes me see you.
Holding that one simple rhyme,
the one that makes me feel you.
Searching for that one song,
the one that holds us together.
Searching for that one song,
the one that bonds us forever.
Searching for that one song,
the one that keeps us forever.
Looking for that one true tune,
the one that makes your eyes light up.
Looking for that one little note,
the one that makes your heart skip a beat.
Author notes
I saw a movie that took the feelings of music and love *Two of my most favorite things in the world* and fused them together. This poem came to me after it was over, but the words of both this poem and the movie will be with me forever.
God Bless You and Yours,
ArchAngel
Written January 22nd, 2006
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I don't know cupcake -he he haven't used that nickname in awhile - this wasn't one of my favorites by you i mean it sounded almost like the shell of what you want to say or maybe more like something you wrote but it didnt come from "you" if you know what i mean - if you don't i can explain better at school i did like this stanza though:
Searching for that one song,
the one that holds us together.
Searching for that one song,
the one that bonds us forever.
Searching for that one song,
the one that keeps us forever.
this one seemed more like Danny not words grouped together in a semblence of meaning keep trying though -
Well I just love the way you set this piece of work out, and I think it is well written with a lovely flow--infact I think it's a truly beautiful tune! so i applaud you and your song. Well done!--keep it up my friend.
love
shaz xx
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Hmmmm. . . This was something, different I guess. In the fifth stanza you were a little repetative. I got what you were saying, but reading the same thing like three times takes away the magic you were trying to spread. Everything else was nice though and you did a great job. Repeating the first and lsat stanza was a good idea though. Anyways, this wasn't exactly my favorite by you, but you did great nontheless.
Schmitty
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