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Message

RING....

RING......

RING.........

RING...........



"You've reached ____________'s cell phone, please leave a message."



Hi

Good night

Good morning

I need you

I want you

I miss you

I love you

Goodbye??...............

Author notes

those who know, know
Written January 22nd, 2006

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  • Kari gold member
    August 10, 2007
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    wow...powerful


  • naked roots
    January 23, 2006
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    =)

    Although your poem isn't lengthy, it says quite alot.. Great job! (and you said, that you aren't a poet!?!)