"Goodies"
You think I'm just young
And will give you the nookie cookie
But I am not dumb
Nor a little rookie
I got what you want
But I'm too independent
The goodies I'll never flaunt
And you'll never get it
Sure you got a nice home
A fancy good looking new car
My goodies never roam
They stay in the jar
You may talk slick
So you can unwrap my candy
But I don't share my milk
So none of that will come handy
No snickers, jolly ranchers, or gum
No laffy taffies, milky ways, and cake
None of this will ever reach your tongue
Never will you taste the candy I make
No matter what you might say
No matter what you try to do
They stay wrapped always
So no goodies for you
Author notes
what is the world coming too
I chose option #1 and #3-Goodies
Written January 22nd, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- A Contest With Many Options, Come Check It Out!!! by stephcheergirl.
500 points, ended February 4, 2006, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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That's right! I keep a lid on my jar of goodies. lol. Thanks for reading and commenting!
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what a strangely funny write, i love the way you describel everything they desire as goodies..a very fun write but with a seriouse side also ..you tell em girl they anit going to bag your candy!
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I wish that was soooooo true at the moment. I plan to give a speech at the close of my business here today. I will be missing you and please take care. I love you!
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! You are so kind!
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I don't live in a nice house,
but I will share my cave with you
No real fancy car do I drive
but I can still see romance from my view
I love your independence and flair
and may be a reason I fell for you
I know you have the goodies to offer
but I only want you for you
Your Hubby
Ted E -
Ok. I will make sure to do that then. I hope you get a lot of great entries and have a lot of fun judging.
~Jay~ -
Thanks for entering my wonderful contest and for putting everything in your author comment box. I like this peice, i really did. I love this song and this poem goes kinda good with the song. It also made me laugh so I would say i would also go under option #1. Once again thanks for entering my contest and good luck.
~~steph~~ -
LOL! wow.. nice one sis lovin it....!
~Amber`~ -
Hey darling...if we move to Arkansas..... This is a great thing for your dad to read! Pick up your "Habit" at the front door! They have to come ask me for the date anyway and I'm scary looking!(6ft 270 pounds) I little flow work, will make this great! WHO'S YOUR DADDY?...ME!!!
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LOL! Not my candy! J/K! But I don't even know rather or not I even like this write. I feel like it could have been better. But thanks for your comment.
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lol Very funny poem. It makes me want candy.
Great write. I like it. Good luck in the contest.
- Andi
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