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Foreigner

Cliché
Cliché
Cliché
how vengefully my lifestyle disgusts me
ad nauseum nauseum nauseum
this self-detesting reaches critical non-borders
ad infinitum infinitum infintum

is death really that unthinkable
(obiit obiit obiit)
in this shackled world we tread
(Weltschmertz Weltschmerz Weltschmerz)


                            *****


What is this nonsense depicted here
faux pas faux pas faux pas

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honest
Written January 22nd, 2006

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  • Regicide
    October 18, 2006
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    Thank you for your applause, this is actually a funny poem - for me that is, it was wrotten when i was extremely pissed off a having to figure out foreign terms for school, long ago. I haven't written anything in a long time... but thanks a lot for your comment, it's much appreciated.
    reg

  • milliem
    October 15, 2006
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    APPLAUSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I'm beginning to see a pattern here you have a big fan!!!!!

  • Regicide
    January 25, 2006
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    Howdy Upstage - 'Weltschmertz' is german for sincere hate for the world/human race. i suspect that i may have misspelled it - i only wrote from memory, haven't had time to check it yet. Now you may understand your affinity to the word ...
    thanks for the comment.
    reg


  • mad hattie
    January 22, 2006
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    brilliant

    I don't know what "weltschmertz" means, but it's one of my favorite words! This shows style. This has it goin' on.
    Pen on and flyyyyyyyy!!!

    peace
    justine