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Vacant possession




 

 








 

 




 

 




Haunting strains of distant
melody, linger on the edge
of remembrance;
Once loved, with deep
emotional ties.. now slips
quietly into the backstage
of memorabilia;
Searching painfully for
exact recollection.. the frantic
sifting of an age old debris of
cluttered thoughts..
A glimpse, contours of a
well known face come into vision
..how could I have forgotten..
Sweet thoughts warm the edge
of forgetfulness..allowing
forgiveness..a subtle prelude
to the dreams of yesteryear
and the memories of tomorrow
As I hug them close, promising
never to forget ..the cloud once
again returns with its blanket
of senility.





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Written January 22nd, 2006

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  • cutiepie gold member
    February 15, 2006
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    There is something rather special about getting older..when one is young the forgiveness is not always there but as one gets older much more is forgivable Many thanks Sandy Delighted that you enjoyed it


  • San-d
    February 15, 2006
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    I find myself so often drifting back to the memories I have left behind. Sometimes good ones and sometimes sad.....But whichever they always bring me to a satisfaction of yesteryear.....I just really enjoy your form of creative writing. You have lots of talent.
    Smiles your way >>>>>>>>> Sandy San-d


  • cutiepie gold member
    January 23, 2006
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    You are too kind my friend I always look forward to seeing your wonderful comments


  • cutiepie gold member
    January 23, 2006
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    Thank you Christie


  • cutiepie gold member
    January 23, 2006
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    Thank you


  • cutiepie gold member
    January 23, 2006
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    Thanks


  • cutiepie gold member
    January 23, 2006
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    Thanks sweetie


  • cutiepie gold member
    January 23, 2006
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    Thank you so much Delighted that you enjoyed it

  • cutiepie gold member
    January 23, 2006
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    Yes my outlaws both have this problem and it can be dismaying to have to try to inject an act of newness when conversations are repeated over and over..rather like a time warp I am so pleased that your mum is happy though..Many thanks for your comments


  • cutiepie gold member
    January 23, 2006
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    Many thanks for your kindness, it is appreciated


  • Diablosanjil gold member
    January 22, 2006
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    It is sometimes so sad the memory loss we face as we age but to even remember a glimpse of our life when we are older will be worth more than money itsself. Great piece. So heart felt and true . Keep up the great work and I can not wait to read more from you. Thank you for sharing this truly wonderful but sad piece. Good luck to you dear friend.


  • grannyeri gold member
    January 22, 2006
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    What a great background for this marvellous poem. My mother has dementia, and she has no short term memory left - she's forgotten something as soon as you tell it to her. Our conversations are like broken records, because we go over the same stuff over and over and over and over again. She lives in a lodge and is happy and content - thus this poem means so much to me, thanks for writing this.


  • ItsalltheSame68
    January 22, 2006
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    Wonderful wonderful wonderful how in the world do you write like this i couls never write like that your amazing keep writing ill keep reading check my stuff out some time plz LOVE DD^*(#


  • Night Hope gold member
    January 22, 2006
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    Haunting strains of distant melody, linger on the edge of remembrance; Once loved, with deep emotional ties..now slips quietly into the backstage of memorabilia...' Sweetie, it's not senility; it's sensory overload...too much to remember... It hasn't been forgotten; it's only been pushed to the back of the closet for awhile...Immaculate imagery once more, my Friend...Lovely penning, Lynne... Wanda
    Edited on Jan 22, 7:48 p.m. because ''.

  • Raynn
    January 22, 2006
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    It would be nice if we had the power to be able to retain memories for ever.

    Amazing poem, you really captured the desperation of someone's trying to hold on to precious memories.

    Keep on penning!

  • Ir.muse
    January 22, 2006
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    This is a great wonderful piece.
    Shahrzad

  • Christabell
    January 22, 2006
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    That was lovely; it was soft in a sense and flowed perfectly. It is a great depiction of a journey of the mind, and what that often entails. Great job on this one!

    ~Christy


  • masterblaster gold member
    January 22, 2006
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    Hi, it's wonderful but I do not expect less from you, lucky me having two of your writes within a few minutes, you do realise you are costing me a fortune in applauses I hope,lol, well worth it my dear friend, lovely lovely write, a big hug Di

  • cutiepie gold member
    January 22, 2006
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    Thank you, I am delighted that you enjoyed this meander around the inner turmoil of the mind Many thanks once again


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    January 22, 2006
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    It is really a true journey of the heart through the poetic words relating to the philosophy of this great nature where this humanbeing is just a toy of the creation and the sentiments which are essence of the life are also a known to lost phenomena of this travel.The journey of life is explored through the assesement of the profit and lose in the bussiness of the sentiments.The flow of the write is very impressive and just to the point too. I relly appreciate this work.prabhudyal khattar

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