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Secret Hours




 

 




How I cherish these secret
hours of solitude
closeted quietly whilst the
house sleeps;
Gentle snores vibrate around
the walls, of a now silent
home;
Hustle and bustle have stilled
with the night air..
Creeping around with baited
breath..willing all into unconsciousness..
She sits..
Time ..just for me..alone, I gather
the paraphernalia of scrambled thoughts into
neat piles..indexed..awaiting
delivery;
Only the gentle tapping of the
keys keep me company..wave
after wave of frantic urgency
manipulate fingers stiff with
effort..pouring forth a platitude
of emotions...
and still the house sleeps..
gradually the need diminishes
and with it..tiredness;
Creeping back upstairs, trying
not to find that creaky stair tread,
my night begins..but for others
..day awakens...





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Written January 22nd, 2006

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  • cutiepie gold member
    January 24, 2006
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    Thank you Pari ..delighted that you enjoyed it

  • Pari Ali
    January 24, 2006
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    and in the secret hours away from prying eyes and ceaseless noise
    I meet my muse

    those precious secret hours how well you have captured them...
    i could not help smiling through this..
    Love
    Pari


  • cutiepie gold member
    January 23, 2006
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    Thank you Delighted you enjoyed it


  • cutiepie gold member
    January 23, 2006
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    Thank you Jordan for your kindness


  • cutiepie gold member
    January 23, 2006
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    Thank you Delighted that you enjoyed it


  • cutiepie gold member
    January 23, 2006
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    Bless you my friend Glad you enjoyed it

  • cutiepie gold member
    January 23, 2006
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    Thank you...delighted you felt the secrecy...I love this time when one is alone and not a sound ..a special time for me

  • cutiepie gold member
    January 23, 2006
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    Thank you...yes, this was written with a sleepness night as inspiration..5am and silence Many thanks for your kind comments


  • Malabu
    January 22, 2006
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    sounds like the life of a insomniac.....love the descriptions and the images of silent solitude and occupancy of ones meditational idleness....wide eyes....await the softness of a pillow....but only in turn....when the sun seeps through....the night is now through....and so is the endless nights awakenss...verly lovely writing cutie...I enjoyed the read...as you can see....my thoughts are now expressed...
    Malabu


  • Diablosanjil gold member
    January 22, 2006
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    I love the secrecy of this poem. The underlying meaning in this piece is outstanding. Such great description and imagery, I could actually see my self in this house and feeling all the emotions yiou have described. Again kudos on this poem, Great piece. Keep it flowing dear friend.And good luck in all you do


  • Night Hope gold member
    January 22, 2006
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    'How I cherish these secret hours of solitude closeted quietly whilst the house sleeps; Gentle snores vibrate around the walls, of a now silent home...' Lynne, I wrote essentially the same thing early this morning...Di read it, too... It's called 'Moving Softly Past Midnight'...Great penning with a universal appeal, my Friend... I love your descriptive technique in this piece, Lady...& I sooo get it...Be well, Poet... Wanda


  • HistoricJ
    January 22, 2006
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    The imagery is stunning in this poem, it was unique indeed. I liked the theme behind this, it was a nice change from what I usually read. Great job, keep it up!

    Belle


  • Jraehazy
    January 22, 2006
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    I really like this poem. The imagery is amazing and I also liked the word choice. Well done. I really like the story that it tells and it is very detailed and i really enjoyed it
    Respects to the pen,
    Love Jordan


  • Squirrel53
    January 22, 2006
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    i like that poem. it seems like u put a lot of work into it. great job! keep up the good work. idk of anything that would make it better.

    much <3


  • masterblaster gold member
    January 22, 2006
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    Ps. forgot to press applause button, well it's Sunday and I'm in coma profound,lol, hugs Di

  • masterblaster gold member
    January 22, 2006
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    Hi, she chuckles, oh my friend could be about me but only on a Saturday night as a working girl needs 5 or 6 hours of beauty sleep, loved it, a super poem of a feeling I know so well, you have my applause, your devoted fan as always, hugs Di

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