You were my only light
And your light seemed to shine bright
But now it's gone away
I can see the light of day
But it's through that dirty window
I followed you like a stupid little girl
And now I find the truth
And I hate myself for thinking you
Could have been the one for me
And I hate you for making me see
Even more pain that is inside of me
I thought that you made me free
But now I see
Yes, I see
I see that your just a boy
You trapped me
You played me like some twisted toy
Couldn't help yourself?
You helped yourself to my vunerability
My insecurity
And you manipulated my heart
Into some vulgar piece of "art"
YOU TORE ME APART
When I was already rent in two
And I cannot mean it now
When I say
I love you.
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Written January 21st, 2006
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Vicci This Poem Is Rele Gd ... Obviously Ur In Pain from Something I love This poem It is Very Emotional
Josh xxx -
vicci this is amazing
I love you xxxxxxxxx
P.s. thanks for your comment on 'the romantics' xxx -
TIS GR8
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww this is so amazing I am going through something similar
dont worry hunni becoz he has hurt you, who ever he is, and you are not to blame, I hope you see that. Your style of writng is unique and each piece seems to have a more and more incredible standard.
well done keep writing xxxxxxxxxxxxx
~Catie~ -
awwww this is really sad but amazing.. like it alot, its well written and shows emotion well, like ur style of writing, its gd, and creative, i like the way it builds up to those final words of saying u cant mean it when u say i love u, tahts well thought out, well done, x x x
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