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Psalm 54



Psalm 54

Feeling abandoned, rejected and betrayed

the only place for me is out amongst the cold.

No one knows the turmoil I am in,

for no one cares, so now my trust in others is gone

Who would of thought a simple smile that I looked upon

could be full of lies and deceit, but I will never

give up hope. I shall remind myself that faith lies within

for the Lord has placed his trust in me he knows

the right decision will be made to only bring

the joyous hymn of praise.

Written By,
BrendaKaye 2006

Author notes

To the chief Musician on Neginoth, Maschil, A Psalm of David, when the Ziphims came and said to Saul, Doth not David hide himself with us?

Save me, O God, by thy name, and judge me by thy strength. Hear my prayer, O God; give ear to the words of my mouth. For strangers are risen up against me, and oppressors seek after my soul: they have not set God before them. Selah. Behold, God is mine helper: the Lord is with them that uphold my soul. He shall reward evil unto mine enemies: cut them off in thy truth. I will freely sacrifice unto thee: I will praise thy name, O LORD; for it is good. For he hath delivered me out of all trouble: and mine eye hath seen his desire upon mine enemies. Psalm 54
Written January 21st, 2006

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  • Sandygram
    January 27, 2006
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    WONDERFUL POEM

    Wow this was beautiful. Thank you for sharing. It was a pleasure to read this morning. Congratulations . Sandy


  • mypassion
    January 25, 2006
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    Thanks windworder for your grace comment and support. God bless Brenda


  • Windworder gold member
    January 25, 2006
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    Thought filled prose, like being allowed to listen to the very devotional thoughts of one finding comfort in God.


  • Jelly Beans
    January 22, 2006
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    Touching...

    I found this really inspirational and its a great read. I love it. Blessings BrendaKaye!

  • mypassion
    January 22, 2006
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    Thanks turtle, for comenting and it is good to know that I can turn to you if i nrrd to talk.. ..God bless, Brenda


  • -Tesoro-
    January 22, 2006
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    this was really good i liked it alot.. and if you ever need n e one to talk to im really good at listening lol.. great write tho it was really good..


    ~Turtle

  • Lora
    January 21, 2006
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    Very beautiful and meaningful poem. Blessings, Lora

  • mypassion
    January 21, 2006
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    Thanks, I think you are my biggest fan..LOL..I son;t really like the title but I could think of anything,so by all means suggestions would help..! This psalm really fit me well a couple of years ago and since I have turned to God the words of this psalm is still my belief to this very day..God bless you my friend..Brenda


  • josh-13
    January 21, 2006
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    Amen, this was an awesome piece. Hey you did an awesome job writing this Brenda, I have yet to read one from you I didnt like. God bless you and good luck in the contest.

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