Remembered every second,
Secluded in every second,
Loved every second,
Heart is beating for every Sick-end,
Tears treating for every second,
Seconds have become hours,
Those seconds were never sour,
Weak it made me for a second,
Thought of that one second brought strength in me the next second
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A thought, a feeling, a rememberance makes so much differance in that particular minute or second.One enjoys every colour of happiness and sadness.
Written January 21st, 2006
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Hi Vic, Thanks a lot for your generous applause. It was just a thought that within seconds how we cry and how we smile and that was the poem all about.Hope u didnt have to do much exercise on this. Take care
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3 Stars ***
Oh well,yep a little confusing for a silly mind like me. I had to read it for few time to get the concept... well.. i think i got it after all, humn silly me has not read your works since long.. i ask for pardon.. i hope you didnt mind it... anyways
.. good work
take cares and have a nice time my dear friend... just keep it up... your humble little friend...
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.... ... - vic ( who else? )
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Thanks so much for reading and appreciating the efforts.
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nice encircling thoughts on time and an infinite array of emotions well expressed.Beautifully done.
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Thanks Jay.
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Hey great work !!! just proved the saying..every second counts is so correct...very good write..cheers Jay
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Thanks Shaitus for reading and generous comments.
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Thanks,your comments are so appreciated.
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Nicely wriiten.
The moments of time are at times unpredictable
and passionate at times. Those seconds are so colourful.
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Neat poem. Yes, there's lots wrapped up in any given second. Thanks for sharing. Michael
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WONDERFUL POEM
This was a beautiful poem Anu. Your words paint a beautiful picture of what each second allows us to feel and then it's gone to the next. We never run out of seconds for eternity await in the end of life on Earth. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem.Hope all is well. Thank you for the lovely emails. I do so appreciate them. I shall write later. Life has been a little hectic and I hope to get my mind back on my poetry. God Bless you Anu. Thank you for being a friend. Love, Sandy
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