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watch me slip, watch me fall,
watch me slowly lose it all.
i'm staring at the ceiling
waiting for tomorrow
through the night that never ends
i'm so alone without you
im a room full of people
my heart would still be empty
the tears roll down my cheeks
one, two, three
its getting so bad i can hardly see
i love you more than anything
and i know you love me too
but im watching you from afar
dig yourself deeper and deeper
you are apart of me
we are one, so as you falter
watch me slip, watch me fall,
watch me slowly lose it all.

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Written January 20th, 2006

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  • Immortalbeauty
    October 28, 2006
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    Hey gurl, this is 92preluderebel.....but I'm under a new name...Immortalbeauty....so I'm adding you as my favorites because I still love your work...and you did amazing on this one....I love how strong the emotion is...whether it is personal or just an observation...well done dear.. i promise I won't be a stranger anymore!


  • cryzndiez
    January 25, 2006
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    *Sighs* sad.. damn everyones sad.. me 2 YAY heh i love the poem