Worn by Celticmoon at All poetry

Beaten
Bloodied
Bruised
Left for dead

Scorched
Burnt
Branded
Scarred for life

Imprisoned
Tortured
Tormented
Psychologically raped

Scratched
Clawed
Shredded
Ragged flesh remains

Twisted
Snapped
Broken
Barely hanging on

All that was
Is now gone
All that is left
Is worn

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Written January 20th, 2006

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Cyber Artist
January 22, 2006
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well done the power of your discriptions rip to the very heart you've taken the picture to the edge with word
Sylvyrwyng
January 21, 2006
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Sweetie.. this is really dark even for me! Like Carrie this worries me... let one of us know if you need to talk ok? We love you and you are a very special gift to us all... we are here so please use us. Love, Chryssa
Sunkissedrose
January 21, 2006
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This is definetly a darker piece from you. Coupled with you leaving here indefinetly it worries me. I am around to talk if you need me...just IM me here, and I'll get back with you. This piece while very dark, I can relate to the pain that radiates from the flow of this piece.

Cya soon hon.
~Carrie
Blushfulmoon
January 20, 2006
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dark~
Wow
Sis this is so very dark....different than your passionate poems as of late...but always good to venture out into something new...
I too am wondering if this happened to a girl.....
Intense and vivid imagery......
Dark and excellent
Hugs
Susan~~~
P S I got up a new one too drop by when ya can and thanks for the trophy in your contest
Love n hugs
Your sis
Susan~~~
Loud-Silences
January 20, 2006
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I did like this, I think it would have been a bit more powerful if like ocerus said - I would have had a little more info. I didn't see emotions, I just saw words. But I did love the flow, excellent job on that . Thanks for sharing this!
SoulWhispher
January 20, 2006
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great
A great poem, short lines with a powerfull punch. Full of images and feelings, I liked it
ocerus
January 20, 2006
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This is decent but a little vague: Who is this happening to? Is it a guy? A girl? A child? Did they do something to deserve this? Who is doing this to them? It's just a little frustrating to me to not know these things. Were I to know them the poem would strike a deeper chord in me. - oce
DarkChildsKiss
January 20, 2006
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OW! This was amazing! I truly enjoyedit! Great Write!
Always Secondary
January 20, 2006
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i rlly lyke this one cuz its lyke so cool n i can feel ur pain throw it. i lyek this part bezt

Imprisoned
Tortured
Tormented
Psychologically raped

Scratched
Clawed
Shredded
Ragged flesh remains

Twisted
Snapped
Broken
Barely hanging

i tink u shoud lyke get pulishd or sumden cuz ur lyjke rlly good.
DreameeDarlin2U
January 20, 2006
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Wow!! I agree short lines...but strong message! Amazing job on this!
Scotlass
January 20, 2006
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The art and the power with which these words slam their way into my head have made this one of the most memorable writes I have had the pleasure of reading in a while. I love it when one word sentences can be powerful enough to hold an entire piece together and make perfect sense. A strong and determined write.
Heavenly Angel
January 20, 2006
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Intensely dark, girlfriend! Wow! Awesomely written!!! I don't think you could've said more if you had tried...wow! Just know you have a place to go to to come out of the dark when you need to ..very well done write!