You offer a hand to me
I can’t help but not sure
Could someone really be offering a dance?
A little chance at love
That I’ve waiting for
Not something I would regret
But Love that will be forever and never change
All I have to do
Is get over my fears
Of being hurt so bad
I wouldn’t feel again
But Love only comes once
I shouldn’t doubt it
Because I know you are the real thing
Your dark eyes look to reassure me
That everything you offer is real
That you know the me that I hide
I can’t help but to so taken by you
The way you seem to read my mind
And know more about then I know about myself
I placed my hands in your and hearts seem to meet
As you pull me close
Things soar through my heart
I have not fully felt
Your love is going to make me grow inside
Make me feel complete inside
Make me the woman I need to be
And one day when I meet you
I know that I’ll just know
That you are the one for me
And I’m the one for you
The meeting of two hearts
In my dreams you
You offer a hand to me
I place my hand in yours
My Dream Love
Author notes
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Written January 20th, 2006
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Nice!
I love that you capitalized 'love' in the seventh sentence. I think that when you said "I placed my hands in your" you meant "I place my hands in yours". I also think that your poem could benefit from the addition of some white spaces to break it up into some seperate stanzas. But overall, great! Keep up the good work! -
"I can’t be help but not sure" Do you mean "I can't help but not be sure" and "And one day when I met you " do you mean "meet"? Eh just a few things i happen to come across. I love how you have so much faith in meeting your dream love. This poem is so promising. A very aspiring piece.
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I love this. I completely understand this. I adore the idea of a "dream love", and a hopeful ending.
xxoo,
ColdBlackAngel
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