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Goddess Thanks

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I was born before my time
In a land so far away
Given gifts beyond my reach
Unable to find my way

Put aside for far too long
Now I am coming into my own
It matters not who will see
What your power can do through me

The lessons that you teach now
Are sent through others who do know how
To use the power given to them
The priceless gift they are allowed to have

Thank you, oh thank you
For all that you give
Thank you, oh thank you
For letting me live

I give myself to you again
In thanks for allowing me to live
In a time where we are allowed
To worship you, every day, aloud

I may not always perform the rituals
But my love for you does grow
With every single breath I ever take

Thank you, oh thank you!
Your every gift given I will take.

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Written January 20th, 2006

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  • April 11, 2006
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    So very true, and wonderfully written! Keep up the good work and good luck in the contest.

  • Sylvyrwyng silver member
    April 4, 2006
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    Thank you for the honor that you have given to my work and I am sure that yours will far surpass mine.

    Merry part Sweet Sister until we merry meet once more.

    Sylvyr

  • Amythest Moonjade gold member
    April 4, 2006
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    beautiful

    Merry meet,
    this is really beautiful. Very spiritual, iunderstand this poem very well. I'm placing in on my author's page. I'm not sure how my poems will compete with such beauty.
    Amythest

  • Sylvyrwyng silver member
    March 31, 2006
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    Thank you very much for your kind words! They are much appreciated.
  • Availea
    March 31, 2006
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    Wonderful! Beautifully penned! I really ejoyed reading it! Keep up the wonderful work and good luck in my contest!
    Blessed Be & Brightest Blessings,
    Sarah AKA LadyDragonWolfe
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