There is a horror coming from deep within,
exploiting You and worshipping every sin.
The voice of the Munchor is haunting me,
telling how to it wants my life to be.
The Munchor born in a country far away from here,
dwells in all humans hearts and is very near.
Created from greed and lust for more,
The Munchor makes every man and woman a whore.
The Munchor can only be defeated by love,
pure and unrefined as a snow-white dove,
What the Munchor fears most is the light,
but it will never succumb without a fight.
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Written January 20th, 2006
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Very spooky and enlightening as well. Very well done. Cheers -
i love the atmosphere that this poem gives off. it's frightening and yet enlightening at the same time, you did very well to express this so clearly.
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Thanks for the comments guys, its is apreciated. Well the Munchor have also now inspired us to make even a call of cthulhu ropleplaying session with this new monster in it.
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You did a very good write on this one. I must agree with Jim onthis one, you painted a great picture of this Myth. The rhymne and flow was awsome. good luck, GETS
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Spooky! A very good description of a new myth, and mixed with a little horror, it is a good poem! Loved the rhymes, and the flow was generally good, but if you change country in first line of second stanza to place it will sound better. A good poem, and though it is without any added picture, it manages to paint a haunting image anyway. Very good! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
Jim
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