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Passions of the Heart

When the heart bleeds for another,
and the soul hungers for it's mate.
When the mind takes control,
and when love is pure.
When the hand longs for closure,
and the eye needs a stay.
When the skin feels for a partner,
and when love touches within.
When the spirit moves for a bond,
and when the body wants for a pair.
When the flower beneath blooms,
and love shines together.

These are the
~Passions of the Heart~

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Just a little something that came to me.  Tell me what you think.
God Bless You and Yours,
ArchAngel
Written January 19th, 2006

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  • Shadowed Days
    March 3, 2006
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    I liked this for the most part except for the ending it seems like you wanted to go on but it got cut short. I think that you should go back and explain what happens "when the heart bleeds for another" or "when the hand longs for closure" - if you want to of course no pressure to make you do anything i just think that by making a few alterations this poem could still send it intended message and be more romantic i mean if i got a poem like that from a guy i would be so ... i don't know if there's a word for it but you're smart enough to know what i mean( i hope lol) well anyway just experiment and find this poem's groove


  • jewel4Him
    January 21, 2006
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    more than just beautiful great job


  • Princess Perdue gold member
    January 21, 2006
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    Hello my dear friend, this is simply beautiful and i love the choice of words you have used here, the flow makes it very enjoyable to read and i can appreciate the thought that has gone into this piece of work. Excellent! i love this poem.
    love,
    shaz xx


  • ForgetthePAst
    January 20, 2006
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    wow this is sooooooo awesome~! definitely a new favorite from you! keep it up!
    ~*~*CJ*~*~


  • Dances With Trees
    January 20, 2006
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    Aww Danny!! This is such a great poem! But really kinda sad though! I HOPE ya find the one you're lookin' for!
    Lotsa Love,
    Lisa


  • ShadowStalker
    January 20, 2006
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    This was kinda sad, but pretty. I'm sure it's horrible when you can't have the one you love. "and the eye needs a stay" I really didn't get that line. Needs to stay where? what? why? The rest of the poem was really great and heart-felt you could say. sniffle No I don't need a tissue. sobs uncontrolably This was beautiful and you did an excellent job. See what happens when you're brain dead for awile...you end up writing something like this.

    Schmitty


  • Passions
    January 19, 2006
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    I like this, short and sweet, By the way i love the title of this.

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