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Sometimes I Sit And Wonder

Sometimes I Sit And Wonder


Sometimes I sit and wonder, where did things go wrong?
What happened to a relationship that was supposed to be so strong?
Yes, I must admit we had our ups and downs,
And we also had our good and bad times.

I thought we had a bond too strong to break;
I thought we had a love no one could take.
Things have happened and we're no longer together.
I can't seem to understand what changed forever.
I loved you like no other,
'Cause you can live your whole life, but you only get one lover.

Sometimes I sit and wonder,
Why are we both acting as if our love was just a flounder.
I tried to make myself get over you,
But I couldn't, my heart controls what I do.
I miss the special moments that we shared,
I miss the times you acted as if you cared.

Sometimes I sit and wonder,
Why the rain falls and the sky thunders.
Baby, my nights are cold and lonely without you here,
I just wish sometimes I could bring you near.

Sometimes I sit and wonder,
Would you ever come back to take my pain and suffering away,
And change all my nights into day?
You say you miss, love, and want me back,

But what I sit and wonder,
is this an opinion or a fact?
I tried to show you I needed you back,
But it just wouldn't do.

Sometimes I sit and wonder
How long your processing time will take,
And when the time is up,
do you think I can be back with you?

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Written January 19th, 2006

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  • Arovell
    January 19, 2006
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    This is a good, meditational poem, that forces one to think. It had a strong beginning and a strong ending. Keep writing!