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I'd Like to Write a Poem

I'd like to write a poem,
Why is that so hard to do?
I'd like to write a poem,
But how? I wish I knew.

Author notes

11) Write a super short poem (no more than 5 lines)

Written January 19th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • Yrusonvs
    June 3, 2006
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    This is simple, and upfront. You did a great job while sticking to the rules but leaving the reader enough room to really think about this poem. Great job,oh yea stay UP!