MOM
This is to you
Here is your angel standing before you,
Halo held high and proud.
But no mater how she tries,
Her halo falls and covers her eyes.
She's blind and her path is rough,
She needs guidance to get through this stuff.
Her halo askew,
"Mom where are you?"
She can't get her halo right,
Tears stream down her face fill with the fears she fights.
"Don't disappoint me, follow my lead. Says a whisper on the air"
"Come back! Where are you? Why don't you care?"
The teary-eyed angel with a halo on wrong
"Were do I go, do I belong?"
A lost angel with a secret she hides
That she can't be perfect no matter how she tries.
Author notes
i got very mad at my mother and so i cried my eyes out and wrote this to get out my feelings.
Written January 19th, 2006
_Laura Beacham_
A contest entry
- Hey! look here pal!!!! by Maddox.
400 points, ended March 9, 2006, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - For Those Poets Who Have Never Won A Trophy Before by wings of an angel.
525 points, ended February 26, 2007, 17 entries
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Not bad. Very interesting actually. I know some Moms who treat there kids this way. Keep writing.
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This is a beatiful poem you penned for your mom I am sure she appreciates it very much good luck in my contest well done dear poet
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this is so true and it speaks the real truth not just for you but for alot of peopleyou are such a great writer and i really felt like you were speaking the truth well good luck with your writhing
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It has been exactly a year since you wrote this poem it is offically retired
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lol yeppero
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Crazy awesome! Unique. That is something no one else could write.
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You're my perfect Laura. =]
I love ya girlie! *hugs*
<3 victoria -
awwww thank you sooo much that was soo sweet. ur amazing 2!
love muches
lbean -
Laura one thing you're going to have to realize is that you are amazing. You've helped me through some stuff just by being who you are. Thank you for being my friend, and mkeep the good writes.
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I have a 13 year old son who has a problem with his halo. Yes I love him Yes I care for him but sometimes he thinks hes the only one in the equasion. He expects me to understand him but does nothing to try to undestand me. I know we`ll meet in the middle one day but its frustrating. Try to see your mums side too. x
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thank you very much. it did help alot. i can't bring myself to have my mom read it.
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don't worry, nobody is perfect, and if they seem to be, it's all fake. i have issues with it too, but my mom is coming around. i hope this helped you calm down and it gets better for you. this is a great poem.
jan
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