Ashley you are my sunshine, you always brighten my day
Every time my heart melts when I see your glowing face
Ashley you are the light which brings imagery to my eyes
My world is now complete with your presence in my life
Around you I feel total comfort, within you I have total trust
My love is yours always, even when I'm gone and turned to dust
Your name is etched on my heart and you checkmated my soul
With a spool of love, Ashley you stitched up my heart from a darkened hole
My life is now magical, your essence is the air that I breathe
Never have I met someone as perfect and who in I truly believe
If I were an instrument, you would be the beautiful notes I play
With you now and with you always, for eternity my love will stay
I Love You Ashley
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To My Everything 
I LOVE YOU BABY
Written January 19th, 2006
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This is the most beautiful poem that I have ever read! Ashley is very lucky to have such a caring person love her, which shows you do! You are a great poet & I thought that was cool how you put some little rhymes in it. You did a terrific job. Keep up the great work & keep writing. You could really get somewhere with this great talent that you have. You can tell that you really put your time & effort into this. Ashley is a very lucky girl. Once again, I love this peice.
xoxo
~!~AmAzInGaLySsA~!~
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wow this ashley is quiet a inspiration for you. This is very well written poem. I the since the of truth and inner honest in your words. Which really spoke in your words when I was reading you poem. I wish you and ashley all the best!
Much love
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Wow, ashley sure is a lucky girl! this is really heartfelt and emotional, well done!
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OMG!!! how wonderful to be able to put into words what your loved one means to you! unfortunely, my husband is my writers block! very beautiful poem, hope she knows how lucky she is. best wishes always
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This really is a beautiful love poem for an obviously much loved and adored special lady! You have expressed yourself well, straight from the heart and honestly. I would suggest in this line: "Never have I met someone as perfect and who in I truly believe" that you should perhaps change 'who in' around to 'in who'...
My favourite line by far is: "If I were an instrument, you would be the beautiful notes I play"
I like how you keep mentioning her name righ through the poem, it makes is somehow all the more special and endearing.
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This has a real sense of truth and an honesty to it that makes it really touching. It's obvious how much you care for this person just reading this. Your words in this rwally deliver the message you were going for, very caring and protective. Well done, keep writing.
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Beautiful, a lovely refreshing read on the beauty of love. My favorite lines are :
"If I were an instrument, you would be the beautiful notes I play"
those lines are just really beautiful, well done
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****! That is so incredibly sweet and sincere. She must absolutely love this!
"Around you I feel total comfort, within you I have total trust"
I love this line especially. You've expressed these caring emotions so well. The imagery in this poem is great, and I can just feel the love.. pouring out through your words. Wonderful write. -
I am surprised that nobody has commented on this before. Anyone that reads this can tell that you are in love with Ashley. I am no expert by any means but I do think you have shown some talent. Good luck with the future of this love.
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