P_ulled from the warmth
U_p against all odds
L_ost in a world of darkness
L_ied to again and again
T_hey locked me up
H_eld down by chains
E_nd of what was suppose to be my life
T_he hope is gone
R_ipped from my soul
I_t wanders the world waiting to be found
G_un in my hand
G_hosts from the past
E_xit to the left
R_ight the wrong, and pull the trigger
Author notes
just whats on my mind i know it isnt that great but i felt like adding it so deal
Written January 18th, 2006
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I like this poem, its short, sweet and to the point, delightful work.
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another nice piece. its short but says so much. they say pictures tell a thousand words. well you needed no where near a thousand words to paint a picture in my head.well done.
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Amazing write.
Beautifully done.
The flow to it is just great,pretty dim and gloomy, desperate sound to it, beautiful dark write.
Love that!
Great job!
Keep up the good work.
Thanks for sharing.
~Hana~ -
Wow. This is perfectly done and i can relate to it so..just..wow! BoundbutnotBroken.
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thanks for rating my poem thigy the thing wont let me thank u individuely for some reason, but yea ur all great the good greta no tthe bad one
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this was really good....i have no idea what to say...this was just that good...i know how it is...just remember that living no matter how bad it gets is still better than dying....<3Anna
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Mangoriffic
I don't usually like poems like this, but you did it very well. I may have to rethink acrostics. -
this is very good just dont pull the trigger on urself or i'll have to work my vodo magic to bring you back to life
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kick ass!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
awesome job! i always love your poems (cuz they rock) and this is definately no exception! great write!
~`*wanda*`~ -
this is very good i like it. keep it up
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