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senryu

at mirror just back
far away byways of youth
like my dad standing

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Written January 18th, 2006

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  • Duana gold member
    May 13, 2007
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    wow- I have never read such a perfect senyru before. This is talent!


  • panegyric ink
    May 12, 2007
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    wow!!!!

    genuinely awsome d!!!! *lovE*


    • poet107 gold member
      May 12, 2007
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      thank you poet...will look in on your work soon...larry

  • Gwenevere
    February 19, 2006
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    Ah Yes, your father in you.As life progresses it is so good to know that the ones we love are growing within us for ever.We will never lose them because they are an integeral part of our make up, Ros

  • poet107 gold member
    January 20, 2006
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    thank you Pam for looking in on me...and your great comment...larry

  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    January 20, 2006
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    Perfet. Absolutely perfect. An image so beautifully presented with so few words. Excellent Senryu. I LOVED this one. ~Pam

  • Jaded Lily
    January 19, 2006
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    Just the cure I needed...a work of perfection from my dearest of friends. You never fail me with the amazing work you present to us here on AP Larry. Excellent! Bravo!

    Lily ~*

  • poet107 gold member
    January 19, 2006
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    thanks shahrzad...see you soon...larry

  • poet107 gold member
    January 19, 2006
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    thank you my dear friend liz...any words from Ron...I'd like to know...your poet frind ..larry

  • Forms of Me
    January 19, 2006
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    This is a wonderful senyru. I always enjoy your talent.

    Be well.
    LIZ
  • Ir.muse
    January 19, 2006
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    This is a wonderful senryu dear Larry.You've done a wonderful job here. Good to read another piece by you.
    Shahrzad

  • poet107 gold member
    January 19, 2006
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    thank you john for your great comments...


    I appear to be
    An image upon water
    His face so clearly

    good luck with the contest...you have some great entries...larry

  • Anna Emkah
    January 19, 2006
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    I have that with my mother too. I am not always happy though with what I see/experience. I am fighting it then, but if I will manage completely? She has also good sides though, of which I am rather proud. Anna.

  • poet107 gold member
    January 19, 2006
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    thank you anna...each day I see him in me more and more...larry

  • poet107 gold member
    January 19, 2006
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    ros you have great sight when it comes to word play...you read me like a book....well done poet friend...larry

  • Anna Emkah
    January 19, 2006
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    Hello Larry, nice to see you back on the boards. And how.... with a great Senryu. Splendidly done again. Indeed, children do certain things exactly like their parents, if they like it or not. It's in their genes. Good luck in the contest. Anna.

  • J Rhys Davies Greeters member
    January 19, 2006
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    There are times I come across a truly talented poet and I just have to sit back and pick up my jaw. You are one of those poets. But I have to admit, I don’t entirely get this one. I know I should, but I am just missing something. Must be that I need sleep, or I truly am daft.

    ~ John

  • Gwenevere
    January 19, 2006
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    As they would say'You are just like him' Just proves that we live on in our children and Grandchildren, well done, Ros
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