Oh patchwork angel
why do you cry?
unravelled stitches of scarlet
do blood tears blind your eyes?
oh patchwork angel
tattered and torn
cast-away
unwanted
abhorred
oh patchwork angel
please do not despair
are your wings broken
bloody with tears?
oh patchwork angel
tell me what do you see
looking in the mirror
staring back at me?
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Written January 18th, 2006
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excellent
hey its me. i like this one it says alot. that angel is ready to scream, i love it -
Really like this poem. Patchwork Angel, very catchy phrase!
Keep penning. Tink
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POWERFUL
Man this poem was straight fire. I can feel this cause, I can honestly say I don't like what I see in the mirror everytime I look. But off of me. Your work is great Its a guarentee that I will keep reading. -
AWESOME!! I love it. Its amazing. You are an amzing poet. very very talented. I wish I was at least half as good as you. Great poem n keep it up.
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Very unique and original. The repetitive line works very very effectively in here and compliments the emotion and thought behind the words. The ending is very strong! I really enjoyed this style and the way that you wrote the poem, it's very creative, sad, but well written.
Beautiful... -
Great poem!! HEy, you wrote this poem so beautifully. YOu really did. Great imagery. Sweet dark angel.. I love the way you look in the mirror and the angel is you..
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i love this poem, i can imagine that angel but yet this is full of power...great write!!!!
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I can relate, good images and emotions.
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Wow. This is very powerful
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