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LIFE's gone to BAD

MY life will always

        Be miserable

  I hate living, nothing worth

    living a hard works


    DEATH



   Hopefully my death will be

          slow and painful so I

Feel all the hurt around me

                Who wants me

      Gone but maybe than EVERYONE will be HAPPY

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Written January 18th, 2006

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  • JaysonBaby
    March 15, 2006
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    good

    hey that is really good. I think that you put a lot of work in all of your poems. Well nice work and keep up that work


  • cake
    January 30, 2006
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    Oh this is a sad and dark write, I hope life is treating you good instead; I suppose we all have our moments when we feel the way you/ve described it here. cake


  • ohhryaan
    January 19, 2006
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    Wow this was a very great write, i feel this way all the time, somethings we can relate too, awesome Desssy!!!lol


  • Dloz88
    January 19, 2006
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    Kill

    This was a good write des, keep it up.


  • aRdNeK
    January 18, 2006
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    Yep, another one I can relate to. I hope you get to feeling better. Very powerful, emotional and descriptive write. Great job! Keep up the amazing work! And hang in there!


  • josh-13
    January 18, 2006
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    "MY life will always

    Be miserable"

    Life is what you make of it, and what you want out of it. I mean I was at this point most my life. Not alot of people know, but i used to be majorly suicidal, and I hated Life. Really it depends what you put your value towards in life that makes your worth, if you put your value towards the world, well this world is like a big toilet, and your going to get flushed. I mean things can get better if you want them to. Theres only one direction, one peace to find that can better you.

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