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gray blue eyes

gray blue eyes
dark decrepid smile
hunched into oblivious
you showed us the obvious
an art never accepted, yet forgotten

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Written January 18th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • Kilrah
    January 19, 2006
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    Thank you for this beautiful entry. Could you please just add which option you chose?