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Time

Time moves so fast
Time will never stop
Time is the beginning and the end
Time is moving always
Time will give us friend's then take them away
Time makes people happy then sad
Time will never end

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Written January 18th, 2006

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  • RoSiE-ChEeKs
    April 24, 2006
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    hey liam, do you think you used the word time enough? Otherwise it's decent.
    Rosie


  • CinSoBella
    March 15, 2006
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    I like it, it's nice. <333 Cin! Holla!


  • simply-jenni
    February 11, 2006
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    honest blue

    i like this poem..it so true and bold...so honest and clear...ack thats it here is the point..its to true and words dont describe....-_-...
    - jenni


  • MorningWinds
    February 9, 2006
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    Yes, very true.
    This part I liked the best "Time will give us friend's then take them away"
    It's deep, true and hit me with great force. You did an amazing job.

  • Lost Spirit
    January 18, 2006
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    ahh yes the cold cruel world of time, yet without it, i doubt the world would ever progress

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