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Never leave and Never hide

I'll tell you of a time or two,
when I really needed you.

I hear all the fighting and the pain,
you're all I had to keep me sane.

I'll fall back and fade away,
then look to god and pray!

Why am I still here, why do I still live!
What more can you take, what more can I give!

If I can't have her every day, what's the reason that I stay?
Knowing she could walk away, leave me empty easy prey.

Then my answers flooded in!
When she started to cry!
The tears that fell down!
Tore me up deep inside!

I need you with me,
I need you now,
Come be with me,
I'll show you how!

Never leave me!

and

Never hide!

Take my hand and come inside!







Author notes

I just thought I should write something, and music was all that was on my mind for somereason, so you kinda have to read this as if your singing.      Side note---  I miss you luv.  ---
Written January 18th, 2006

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  • teardrop gold member
    January 22, 2006
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    I really like this piece. Has kind of a sing song to it. I love your format as well. BRAVO!!

    TD

  • Tu Leona
    January 18, 2006
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    Wonderful

    It's a wonderful piece. Very heartfelt and emotional. OF course, I absolutely love it, and I miss you too. Soon, very soon, I promise.

    ~>Tu Leona<~