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This falls under the option of love...
Written January 17th, 2006
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Thank you again...
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This is a really cool shape of a bell
I loved it to bits. best of luck in the contest
warm thoughts
Frozentearz -
Welcome again
~Lilac~
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Thanks so much..
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I love the shape. And the words you used were great.
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Another wonderful shape poem, Sherry! Beautiful bell! I collect bells now too, so this one really touches my heart. I've done some minor editing, as you requested, but didn't get very far. Need to head to bed as it's almost 3:30 a.m. and Grant keeps coming into the office wanting to get some sleep. Big day tomorrow--very busy day. Anyhow, I'll leave what I edited below, which isn't much, and will try and get back to this poem as soon as I can. Here goes:
Period needed after "bells." 4th line.
Period needed after "often." 6th line.
Cap the (s) in "Still." 6th line.
And, that's it for now. Doesn't look like this will need any major editing and I can tell how very hard you worked on this lovely write! Keep them coming, and never get discouraged. I am so impressed with how far you've come. It's easy to see that you've been applying what you learn, as we all should. I would say you're probably the best writer of "Shape Poetry" that I know! Keep them coming! Love to you! Be blessed! Heading to bed now. Hope you sleep well too, and hope you have wonderful dreams! Sleep tight! Will chat later . . . --Kel
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Thank you so much Whydol for reading this
by the way what is your real name? So when
we talk I can call you by that.
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This was great. I saw one of the first shape poems on poetry.com It was a tear. Idea?? Really great write though.
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Myra, Hey there thank you for your comment I have missed talking and hearing from you. I'm glad you enjoyed this. I am intrested in buying your book but need a address to send the check to please? Did any of my shapes make it in it? I hope your doing well thanks so much for reading this. Love,Sherry ♥
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Lovely
Dearest Sherry
I agree with all of the above comments - you certainly know how to do shape poems!
The sound of bells recalls many memories ... and you captured a special feeling of love here, my friend.
Well done!
Myra
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this was sweet... I love how you can do these shape poems.
Yvonne
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Thanks my friend glad
that you enjoyed this.
Sherry~ *
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Thank you so much I'm glad you like this. Me~
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This is a great warm piece for your late uncle.It shows you have a heart of gold.Sure we all remember the lost dear persons in our lives.
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Hi Vickie, Thanks Im glad you enjoyed this
you probably need do them in a program.
Then save them then upload love you lots, Me
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Sure it looks like a bell, you silly girl. You need to tell me how to do these. I try to do them on the poem page and when I post it, it doesn't look anything like I thought it would.
Do you do it somewhere else and copy and paste?
You had a nice message within its border, as well. vj
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I think "I may not have seen him often" would have been grammatically better.
Nice little creation.
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Thank you Ms. Cookie ♥ wonderful lol..
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Yes! It does look like a bell. It must have been quite a labor. Your words determine it so as well. ( ohp! That rhymes)
It looks like a bell,
it must have been quite a labor
the words determine it well.<----------- not a fine poem , but must be inside the tongue and cheek.
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Yay thanks glad you liked it yay lol Me
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I love it Sherry. And yes it does look like a bell. I especially like the way L O V E looks at the end of the poem. This is a wonderful way to remember your graeat uncle. Hope all is well. Love and hugs - joanne
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You do these so well. I love this. I can never get mine to hold their shape when I copy and paste. Excellant work.
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Hahaha u like my bell great (lol) I'm still trying to figure if it looks like one I guess bells come in all shapes or can? So glad you enjoyed it love, Me ♥
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Bravo Sherry! These words ring true and also with me on loved one priceless things.~~~~Suseann
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Do you think it looks like a bell? LOL
I've done better ones but I wanted to
try to do a bell tonight thank you.
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yo i love these type poems
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