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I love you

I will love you forever
With you always in my heart
Every beat we move as one
Never will we part
Hold me tight through this cold dark night
Let my kisses take you
I love you with all my might
And never will I hate you

You are the one
Shining bright In this lonely life of dark
You are MY one
The brightest light
The most beautiful heart

And I long for your kiss
I ache for your arms
Those eyes, deeper than any abyss
Your amazing smile, i miss
I wish you were here
To whisper sweet thoughts into my ear
Make it all better
Heal my wounds
I need your touch
I love you too much

And if you hurt
I hurt
And if I ever hurt you
I don't know what I'd do
I may take my life
A broken heart
Impaled on a cold knife
For I feel your pain
I share your dreams
And when you cry
Inside I die
You are my life
My world
And I swear that this much is true:
I

love

you

~*~

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Written January 17th, 2006

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  • behind closed eyes
    January 18, 2006
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    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! OMG! this is soooo cute!! i love this! wow. the emotion is brilliant, beautifully written. made my heart all thumpy...lol. well done.


  • -playing-dead-
    January 17, 2006
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    aww this is really cute and sweet, full of beautiful emotion, made me smile which is an effort currently, so thanks and well done, great write, cute and heartfelt, well done x x x