Oh, to be lying,
On a beach,
Somewhere,
With sand in my toes,
And the wind,
In my hair.
And only the sound,
Of the seagulls,
On high,
On a beach,
Somewhere,
Under sunny blue sky.
The gentle caress,
Of the waves,
On the shore,
And you close,
Beside me,
Could I ask for more?
A soft sandy beach,
That goes on,
Forever,
You, me,
And a beach,
So happy together.
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my best friend wrote this
i thought it was beautiful for a first timer...soo i had to put it on here
comment is ya want..ill tell him what u said
xoxox
kayla
Written January 17th, 2006
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my friend wrote it and i wanted to post it on the site because he like never wrote poetry before and it turned out good..soo yea...if ya wanna talk my screename...that you blocked? is ducttapeissuper....im usually on so yea..
xoxo
kayla -
kay
good but doesnt sound like you cuz last i knew which was forever ago you hated beaches but okay.. -
so sweet, so awesome
Aww that is so sweet, it was really beautiful for a first timer!wow,that's just awesome... in a way it's kinda like those romantic summer anthem songs or whatever lol. Well I hope he continues writing, it really is a healthy outlet. And hopefully this gets the comments it deserves!
-Kay
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