a beautiful soul locked away in a dungeon for crimes uncommitted
another cold distant soul locked away in a dungeon of her own doing for reasons untold
these two souls brought together by fate to be connected the rest of their days?
or to drift apart like so many others?
question after question brought forth
each with a happy ending or a sad beginning...
is it worth the wait for its unveiling?
if what wonderful connection made through ink on page...
then connection broke through sound of voice
vision of beings that are so close apart
touched that maybe cold and distant
what then?
is it then the horrid words of good-bye forever?
good-bye I say or said by you?
without love?
knowing full well hello isn't to come in further time...
with only ink to remind us of any connection ever had?
yet another sad beginning but wait...
is it a happy ending to come?
to plan a meeting on after the next to truly anticipate until it arrives at last?
then to keep it in memory just to play it out over and over...
or is it we never again say good-bye?
or at least mean it with love... as always
yes...
this is worth the unveiling.
Author notes
Written January 17th, 2006
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hope lives
to expose your vulnerabilities, hoping for the best
Knowing fantasy is better than reality
& yet we try just one more time
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I thought it was more on commitment hmmm?
Tyler -
What about "Confusion" or "Contemplation" or "Confliction". Sorry I'm just trying to give you as many suggestions as possible here, it's a pain when you're blanked for a title.
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I'd personally go with The Unveiling as that came to mind before I'd read any comments. To be honest that word jumps out.
Peace & love to you,
Roz
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or ..Ink On A Page .. Invisable L(ink)
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The Ink and The Unveiling ? The Unveiling ..
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how about Unraveling Questions or something? I was kinda confused too...and there were so many goodbyes and hellos..im not even sure what to say >.< but it wasnt bad.good write
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What about the obvious - "The Unveiling" - or "Close Connections"-
I like this poem. Relationships are such messy things - so many twists and turns - so many maybes. I hope all works out. Happy writing. - joanne
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I'm confused by this and honestly don't know what to write, there seems to be so many twists. Yeah sorry for the lame comment.
Tyler
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