Cannonball of despair
Shattering the side of the stronghold
People inside screaming out
Desperately wanting a savior to come
On the outside of the structure
It looks strong and protective
But on the inside… which is what counts
Chaos reeks havoc and torments the people
Unable to defend itself from the attacks
The war rages on, feels like forever
Will peace ever return to this place?
When will it end, oh, when will it end?
My life, spiraling downwards
Faster and faster it continues
Unable to stop the pain...
Just waiting for it all to be over
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Maybe a little bit different piece of poetry that anyone was expecting... but ya. I tried to be unique and metaphorical about this poem. 
I was planning on taking a break from this site, but right now... life just sucks for me. I hate it. 48 hours ago everything was fine... *sighs* It seems when you are at your highest of highs, Satan knows how to attack you to make it hurt the most. Ah well, no complaints. Life will go on.
Written January 17th, 2006
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the battles will come, we will fight them, and we will win! there's no room for doubt, we have to believe that when we are struggling within, we will be victorious in the end. sorrow, it finds everyone.
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(because you sound like you need them 
) i hear you loud 'n clear 
life really sucks sometimes, and it feels like there's no meaning to it all... but there is. i assure you God will find some way to use whatever it is you're going through to reach others. He never puts us through anything we can't handle. there's a quote on my author page... basically says that Jesus never promised that life would be easy, but he DID promise to help us through it. actually, now that i think about it, there's a LOT of stuff on my author page that's about going through crap... just keep praying, don't give up hope OR faith, keep your chin up, and all that corny encouragement stuff. i'll pray for you.
aleicia
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hey,awsome poeme ...and don't worry even if it does get worse before it gets better just remember that you will eventually get better(wow i really stink at giving advice) any way i will keep you in my prayers and i've been depresset to latly so i'm hopping it will confurting that your not the only misrable person....(k stink at this so i will try and stop before i make things worse)....again iwill be praying for you
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Thank you.... I know it'll get better... but it'll probably get worse before it gets better. ah well, that's life, lol.
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no complaints eh?! heh seems like u got plenty to complain about... and id perscribe doin that some time... jsut letting it all out...
i promise it will be over. however soon... i dont no. but u will 'see the light of dawn'. pryain for u as always. remember the battle is the Lords. just take it a day at a time...ull make it! 
mushy
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