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No Hurry



I stood looking
her long blond hair
sprawled across the pillow
blue eyes sparkling
               mischievous
filled with passionate desire
 I undressed before her
and my eyes scanned
the contour of her body
as she lay beneath the satin sheets.
I let my pants fall to the floor
and my want revealed before her
I watched as
her nipples pressed against
the smooth cloth
and she squirmed a little.
Cuddled now
beneath the sheets
I feel her warm body
press against me
nipples brush my chest
as she presses her firm
breasts to me.
Now I am filled
with passionate desire.

The stroke of my fingertips
follows the curve of her neck
                       breast
                       stomach
thighs
and back to her cheek.
With gentle hands
I pull her lips to mine
part her lips and feel
the electricity of our tongues
as they  touch ever so lightly.
I bite tenderly  on her lips
push my tongue into her mouth
as she responds with soft
caresses on my lips.

My hand again strokes her
time has no meaning now
only the pleasure that awaits us…
Between her legs I rest my hand
and let it absorb the heat
and with just a touch of my finger
I trace the folds of her sweet lips
then gently my finger slides into her
          her clit raises to meet my touch
swollen and luring me closer
and my mouth covers her breast
and my tongue flicks her nipples
      we both moan
for I
am as content as she
with where I am
and what I am doing…

Slowly, gently my tongue
traces wet trails
down her body
across her belly
        it quivers
and then my lips
reach her warmth
and I taste the sweet nectar
of her passionate desire…
        her body arches
                      pushes
against my mouth
and tongue and fingers.

slower still, soft, gentle
light tongue touches
feeling her respond
with each flick, each nibble
each suck …
She flows out to me
arching, moaning…
My erection aches for her
but my tongue and mouth
want her more
and time has no meaning

Quicker, faster, harder
mouth, tongue and fingers
work in rhythm together
  I feel the moisture of her body
like heat rising from asphalt
  I wait for it all to climax
  to come flowing to me
gushing, boiling
her body tightens
hips rise
      push
      pulse
and finally
the moan is a clenched teeth
scream
she grabs my head
pulls me tight
and pushes
her clit throbbing with the orgasm
even the folds of her lips
seem to quiver…

She finds her breath
  breathes in hard
                  out heavy
and relaxes…
I raise my eyes
she’s smiling
with her hand still holding my head
she pulls me up
and I push my erection into her…
a gasp
a smile
and then she says
hold on cowboy…

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written for a special person who inspired this with words...
Written January 17th, 2006

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Comments

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  • queenmab
    April 23, 2006
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    oh god so yummy

    ooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhh
    i want more


  • bethan-gaze
    January 24, 2006
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    Mmmmmmm

    Antwon, this is beautiful. She must be one hell of a lady!


  • raingoddess gold member
    January 22, 2006
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    Wow!!!! This is hot, I think that I need a cold shower, you have done an excellent job and I love the vivid wording in this poem, thank you for sharing and please keep them coming.


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    January 18, 2006
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    Steamy

    Very very nice! Someone's awfully lucky. Need that damn cold shower again...whew ~StormGoddess

  • Kinky Lil Devil
    January 17, 2006
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    amazing lucky girl wish it were me miss ya lots see ya around cowboy


  • ELEMent
    January 17, 2006
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    kool

    i like this...it amsued me 'Quicker, faster, harder
    mouth, tongue and fingers
    work in rhythm together' that part made me laff....though this is not a comedy piece it is still witty....i like it alot nice 1


  • Stardust100
    January 17, 2006
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    great work


  • Stardust100
    January 17, 2006
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    excellent


  • Passionate Desyre
    January 17, 2006
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    Excellent!!

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